Paul hello.
Forgive my brief note as I am really busy but I hope it forms some sort of help for you.
—For a second year your books seems strong.
—There's a good mix of media and it feels nice and diverse.
—The Warp stuff feels like your strongest piece to me and so it's good that you kick off with that but the other stuff feels like it has more of a story to tell.
—Take more care when shooting your work and think about telling the story of what you did. Your work should be able to tell the story without you.
Again, sorry for the brief response, but I hope it is of some use at least.
Craig.
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